Connection

by Shinobi   Oct 13, 2007


Loving a girl
The prettiest ever
Every time we meet
I feel so great, that we're together

Have a very good friend
Who happens to be a girl as well
Talking with her was never easy
And that's all I can tell

Speaking to my love one
Was always fun and easy
She is my shining sun
For her you can be never busy

Talking to my friend is tough
Found myself fighting, and giving away
Our conversations were always rough
And we never had anything to say

After a while we conversed nicely
Found a subject that we both love
Now I talk to with my friend for hours
As I talk to my love one, My divine angel from above

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  • 17 years ago

    by Brittney Follett

    I think on this the only thing you can do is to watch yoru flow some of your lines get a little long and some are too short.. so try and fix that and you'll be okay.. o

    great job

    5.5

  • 17 years ago

    by Spirit

    Wow i really like this poem it is deep and interesting.
    i can't think of anything else to say/write

    keep it up
    Sam Mayo

  • 17 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    This poem had alot of emotions, like many of the other's. However the flow was a little off, and the content got a little confusing.
    I like how you discribed them each, however at the end it was confusin to tell who you where calling your..

    'Love one, your divine angel from above.'

    Just some things to think about.
    Still a good peice.
    --Elly.

  • 17 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    It's a nice poem, but the flow was a bit off. It's really nice though.

    4/5

    <mOnStRiTo'S pRiNcEsS>

  • 17 years ago

    by Cella Bella

    Another poem with great emotion. Great read on love and friendship and the struggle between the two. 5/5

    marcella

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