Do you hear my voice?

by gurbatt   Oct 13, 2007


I'm struggling and straining for you
I'm facing the dragon because of you
I'm deprived in your love do you hear my voice?

I really don't care if i have been killed for you
I am climbing on the peak of barrier to get you
but I have lost your focus do you hear my voice?

I am loosing my self because of you
I'm welling to jump out of the mountain to reach you
I'm out of my mind do you hear my voice?

I am running after you
I'm wasting energy for you
energy is nothing I'm holding my heart in the hand for the sake of you.
please understand I love you
do you hear my voice? do you?

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  • 16 years ago

    by BubblyJolie

    I like your poem. Flowed good! 4/5

  • 17 years ago

    by lakitu

    I think thats a great piece of writting.... nice one 5/5 xx

  • 17 years ago

    by Nina

    Yes yes i do hear u lol great poem 5 out of 5

  • 17 years ago

    by Miu

    Aww! Like this is an amazing love poem, so selfless making everything for one you love. Beautiful so beautiful. I don't understand why it's under special events, maybe you could explain me that :)!
    It was just so beautiful, flowed perfectly and amazing wording.
    Flawless! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Nula

    Omg! i love that poem...love the expressions..

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