Someday

by Chelsey   Oct 13, 2007


I see him everyday
But I never know his story
I never see his pain
How he has no glory

I've wanted to introduce myself
but always got to scared
I never knew how he'd react
I just wasn't prepared.

He walks with his head down
He always looks like he's gonna cry
I want to help him
But I'm still afraid to try

He doesn't talk to anybody
he carries his books close to him
What makes me think he'll talk to me?
Am I any different than them?

Everyone makes fun of him
He's the boy that has no friends
But I'm different, I pray for him
In hopes that god sends.

I want to approach him
Tell him that I care
tell him that I'm not like everyone else
and that I'm willing to share

But yet again I'm to afraid
of what he might say
So I wont talk to him
But maybe someday

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  • 16 years ago

    by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA

    I wrote a poem kind of like this, but it's different than yours. This was absolutely amazing. I love the feeling in this. You did a great job!

    .:CiNdY:.

  • 17 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    "He walks with his head down
    He always looks like he's gonna cry
    I want to help him
    But I'm still afraid to try"

    ^^How I love that stanza, it's so beautiful, moving, inspiring and yet somewhat sad all at the same time.

    I thought you did a great job with this, the concept, flow, imagery, wording and emotion all came together to create a truly beautiful read.

  • 17 years ago

    by luv Shelbz luv

    I totally agree with kayla
    it is a outrageously
    awesome
    and i love it i liked the last
    stanza a lot if i had a cat
    i think it would say this poem
    was purrrrrrrfect hahaha i know that
    is totally random but true great
    kewl awesome amazing
    outstanding wowie job

  • 17 years ago

    by Kayla

    This has to be my favorite poem from you. I felt so sad whenever I read it.. my eyes start to water a little. It was just so sad thinking about the boy in this poem, the one with no friends, how he's so different from everyone, and no one will show him that they care. There was so much emotion in this poem and it was just amazing. Honestly, I didn't have a favorite stanza in this poem. I thought every single line was perfect and I loved every one. You definitely made this poem come together perfectly. The beginning was perfect, the middle was perfect, and the ending was perfect. Like all of your other poems, this one was very organize and you didn't lose me once during the poem; I knew exactly what you were talking about. Keep it up hun!! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

    ~Rikku~

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