This has to be my favorite poem from you. I felt so sad whenever I read it.. my eyes start to water a little. It was just so sad thinking about the boy in this poem, the one with no friends, how he's so different from everyone, and no one will show him that they care. There was so much emotion in this poem and it was just amazing. Honestly, I didn't have a favorite stanza in this poem. I thought every single line was perfect and I loved every one. You definitely made this poem come together perfectly. The beginning was perfect, the middle was perfect, and the ending was perfect. Like all of your other poems, this one was very organize and you didn't lose me once during the poem; I knew exactly what you were talking about. Keep it up hun!! 5/5 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3

~Rikku~

I totally agree with kayla
it is a outrageously
awesome
and i love it i liked the last
stanza a lot if i had a cat
i think it would say this poem
was purrrrrrrfect hahaha i know that
is totally random but true great
kewl awesome amazing
outstanding wowie job

"He walks with his head down
He always looks like he's gonna cry
I want to help him
But I'm still afraid to try"

^^How I love that stanza, it's so beautiful, moving, inspiring and yet somewhat sad all at the same time.

I thought you did a great job with this, the concept, flow, imagery, wording and emotion all came together to create a truly beautiful read.

I wrote a poem kind of like this, but it's different than yours. This was absolutely amazing. I love the feeling in this. You did a great job!

.:CiNdY:.