I Won't Say I Love You.

by Teria   Oct 13, 2007


Darling, tell me the truth of all the hearts
that rise to more than a man.
Shelter my mind from glorious riches,
so that I may not find a richer man.
(Though it's not at all possible.)

Darling, run your fingers through my hair,
catch my heart after you watch it fall.
Break the pattern of only cowards;
Since, I've learned this isn't a free for all.
(Though it never was : Broken hearts.)

Darling, walk with me through heaven's land.
meet me at that Golden Gate.
I won't say that I love you (right now).
But, I see within our hearts - it's fate.
(Though it's hard to see through fog.)

Darling, tell me the truth of all the hearts,
run your fingers through my hair.
Darling walk with me through heaven's land,
don't hold back - they're only unsaid words.
(Though they're known in the truth of hearts.)

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  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Honestly, the repetition of some words in this piece ruined the impression for me. For example, in the first stanza, repetition of the word "man" in the second and the fourth line.
    All in all, this is not my favorite one of yours. I like the rhythm of it, but I don't see many emotions behind your words. I don't want to offend you, this is just my opinion.
    This stanza stands out and it is absolutely perfect:

    -Darling, walk with me through heaven's land.
    meet me at that Golden Gate.
    I won't say that I love you (right now).
    But, I see within our hearts - it's fate.
    (Though it's hard to see through fog.)-

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