Interesting and unique nice job 4/5

I truely enjoyed this piece Wallace, You and Sunny work so well together. The flow was spot on and the topic really unique which caught my interest. I loved your word choice they were capturing. Overall such a different read. Good to see something which isn't so cliche these days. Well done guys. Loved it. ~Mel

I really enjoyed this piece by the two of you...imagry was there...liked the word usage...you guys collab well together. Great work!!

Wow, wow... Amazing collab, I like every stanza, it is truly greatly written from the beginning to the end. You two did excellent job on this piece. I like descriptions a lot, and I admire the uniqueness of this poem.

You 2 must be quite a team to come up with such an amazing poem. The rhyme and the imagery was explosive. Fabulous job! 5/5

Flawless! The words were just amazing and created such beautiful imagery. It was a wonderful and interesting read. Great collab! *5/5*

Amazing poem!
I loved every single bit of it.
It flowed together so nicely
and it made perfect sense
I love love loved it!!
5/5

Gret piece of work and unique.

You have a great talented.

5/5

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Gret piece of work and unique.

You have a great talented.

5/5

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Wonderful job on this....very unique and descriptive...you both did an awesome job on this! 5/5

Another really well written poem, big ups you and andrea. The adjectives are really cool as are the verbs which give explanations xxx alex xxx