This is very very well written. I think everyone has gone through that struggle of trying to live, get over it & forget about it...and a lot of people just can't and end it. You are very talented. Good job.

5/5

Awesome job. I liked it. Good emotion. keep up the good work.

And thank you for the comments on mine.

Good poem, I like the emotions, like the pain and all. I just love the sad ones and this was sad, AND powerfull. Good work and keep it up =)

Great job, yet again:)
I really like suicide poems so yeah 5/5