by chiildhoodMEMOiiRS x Oct 14, 2007
category :
Life, society /
other
I'm born in this world to live life to the fullest, |
by she
Inspiring, good job |
Very nice poem |
Needs a bit more structure to it, otherwise I really liked it, great message in it :) keep it up! |
Good write really does describe how things are today. Great Write! |