by Blake Oct 14, 2007
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
I don't know what to do anymore |
I liked it. the flow was a bit off but stil it was Great. it also does remind me of things in my pass. it was very nicly writen. you did another Great job here. Keep it up! |
by Hollywood
I loved this It was very good I could feel your emotions great job! |
by SpEcIaLmE
This poem is cool :) |
by Jenna
The flow was a bit off...but other than that it was good...keep it up |
by Mimi
See you're already improving. You did a good job with spacing and rhyming..BTW i like that you recognized that you don't always have to. |