Wow! Awesome again! Sweet and happy... yet kinda sad at the end again... its just a dream...

But very VERY well written! I loved it!

An excellent piece of poetry. Truly phenomenal. Your poems come from the heart and are exceptionally meaningful. Excellent job in putting this piece together.
Keep up the marvelous work. I look forward to readng more of your work.
Take care always
Kristina

Terrific Lar..and soooo sad!!! I have written like this too.......and..thenI woke up..basically. Wonderfully written and hope you find your dream girl soon...you never know, she could be on here reading your work..mine wsa!! Take Care, talk soon Michelle :)

love it! your work is amazing! i didnt comment on all of it but i have read it all and yours is by far outstanding! i love it more and more!
lexi lou