Aww! Powerful, you really say everything streightly out, how you feel and take situatsions from your own life.
Very sad poem. It flow was mood and ryhmed really good!
Keep it up! 5/5

Oh wow Chelsey.. this was such an amazing poem.. so beautifully written and full of so much pain and sadness. I loved the way you used your words in this poem. The first stanza wasn't so strong, but the ending was so powerful and perfect! You made everything in this poem come together perfectly and beautifully and I absolutely loved it! Great job!! =D Keep up the awesome work! 5/5 <3 <3 <3

~Rikku~

Aww that's rlly said
but at the same time
simply amazing
it was so great from the
1st wrd to the last wrd
i think that u should keep
up this great writing
u hit the ending right on the
head it was very powerful
and genuine

Good!

This one, This piece is quite similar to the other poem that Ive just commented, But on the behalf of it, I can see that the flow is force, but I can see much effort on it!

Keep it up!

WOW!!! I love this poem, it seems you take things from your own life. It was real good.....i use my life for poems too...but idk if you really have tried to kill yourself or not but its really not worth it. Trust me i almost killed myself, i cut myself with a single edge razor blade and spent a week in a half in the hospital....and it was all becuz of a guy and stupid jealous girls talking behind my back....its really not worth it.

Hi. :/

I know we haven't talked lately because of our little "falling out"... if you could call it that. But I just wanted to let you know that the poem was amazing and that if you need me, I'm here. [No matter what you say, I AM here.]

-- Steph

Usually, I don't like poems that mention self harm/suicide etc, as I find them cliche.

However, I loved this one.

So much raw pain, emotion and depth.
I was hooked from the first stanza and from there on it just kept getting better and better.

Coupled with a stunning ending, this is a beautiful piece...filled with such melancholy and heartbreaking to read, yes. But a beautiful piece of writing nontheless.

Wow, this was just great. I don't really write poems like this, but this poem was absolutely amazing. Great job! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.