The Imagionary Boy

by Laurenf7   Oct 14, 2007


He walks with me when am in town,
He walks with me up the stairs and back down
He walks with me when I need a reassuring hand
He watches me dance to my favourite band.

I only see his face,
Never arms or feet
One day in heaven
I will meet
My Lovely Little Brother
The world never got to meet.

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  • 16 years ago

    by XxBR0K3NxX

    AWW THiiS iiS SUCH A TOUCHiiNG POEM. ii KiiNDA CAN RELATE. ii WOULD HAVE HAD AN OLDER BROTHER AS WELL, BUT MY MOM HAD A MiiSCARRiiAGE. BUT ii LiiKED iiT! GREAT JOB! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.

  • 16 years ago

    by littlemissxsunshine

    I lvoe this is is amazingg
    and i kinda undserstand in a wayy

  • 16 years ago

    by xoxkatrinaxox

    Aww i like this.i would have had a older brother but he didnt make it. it would have been kool to have a brother because we are all girls. 5\5 love it nice job!!

  • 17 years ago

    by ali

    Wow, so emotive
    i can really relate to this so good job!
    5/5
    ~x~

  • 17 years ago

    by Laurenf7

    Thx for the comment
    my mum had a miscarriage 3 times so... it was a poem straight from my heart!

    x

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