Thats a really good poem..
and i can totally relate to it.
My brother died 6 minutes after he was born, so I never got to see him.
I really loved it.
two thumbs up.
xoxo
--Chelsey

Thx for the comment
my mum had a miscarriage 3 times so... it was a poem straight from my heart!

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Wow, so emotive
i can really relate to this so good job!
5/5
~x~

Aww i like this.i would have had a older brother but he didnt make it. it would have been kool to have a brother because we are all girls. 5\5 love it nice job!!

I lvoe this is is amazingg
and i kinda undserstand in a wayy

AWW THiiS iiS SUCH A TOUCHiiNG POEM. ii KiiNDA CAN RELATE. ii WOULD HAVE HAD AN OLDER BROTHER AS WELL, BUT MY MOM HAD A MiiSCARRiiAGE. BUT ii LiiKED iiT! GREAT JOB! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK.