by Corinne Oct 14, 2007
category :
Life, society /
inspirational
An allegory/parable :-) |
Wonderful write...the message you declared within your poem is amazing, and very true, sorry to sound repetitive but this is a very powerful write....well done. the flow was superb and the final stanza fit perfectly with the rest of the poem to add a remarkable conclusion to an even more remarkable poem. 5/5 |
by Lisa
Wow powerfully written |
by Angie
Wow, what a powerful message within your words. I love this piece, well done. |