Wow, what a powerful message within your words. I love this piece, well done.

Wow powerfully written
keep it up!

Wonderful write...the message you declared within your poem is amazing, and very true, sorry to sound repetitive but this is a very powerful write....well done. the flow was superb and the final stanza fit perfectly with the rest of the poem to add a remarkable conclusion to an even more remarkable poem. 5/5

The pocket fiend!