by Mimmi Oct 14, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
***This poem is about the boy who showed me that love really exist in this world, it's my first poem I've ever written so I would really like it if you would comment it :)*** |
by Mike Martin
This is really good for your first poem. And yes, there is love in you, never forget that...You will get over this and no, you won't forget the last kiss...5/5....xoxoxo |
by Mike Martin
This is really good for your first poem. And yes, there is love in you, never forget that...You will get over this and no, you won't forget the last kiss...5/5....xoxoxo |
by Not
For this to be your first poem its a good one my favor part was""You walked into my Life, when my world was dark and cold, |
by Keith
This is very good and deep, even better considering english may not be your 1st language. comment back pls :) |
WOW this poem is like really good. you have great talent. Keep writing |