Love ya

by Blake   Oct 14, 2007


Why do i love you so?
when you use to beat me years ago!

i used to be so scared
waiting,hoping,wanting to believe that you cared,

couldn't you see,
see what you was doing to me?

spending all your money on alcohol,
while i set there with no food at all!

while my tummy turns and twist
i was wanting my mommy to be there to witness this

but she had left you along time ago
for the same reason i wanted to go!

but i could do nothing about it
at that time i was just a kid

i had no place to go
and now I'm older i must show

show you that there are no more cuts or bruises
with time passing by,

they healed on the outside,
but they will never heal on the inside!

and now that i think about it
i wished you wouldn't have pulled me out
as i fell asleep in the bathtub!

if only i had locked the door!
i wouldn't be here anymore!

love ya daddy

10/14/07 Blake Forrister

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  • 16 years ago

    by CanUKissAwayMyPain

    I loved it. it is unquie. i can relate to this. but in another way. the flow was very nice. i really love it from beginning to end. Awesome job!
    5/5

    TaKe CaRe,
    frenchy

  • 16 years ago

    by Colby

    Loved it.... very unique... with the 2 lined stanzas....

    We've got some good poets in this club.

    Keep up the good work.

    Colby

  • 16 years ago

    by Gemma

    Awww xx that is really go0d and touching
    xx loved it xxx
    gemma mwahh

  • 17 years ago

    by Mimi

    Wow. its incredible how things like this can happen. the poem itself it rly well written. on one part is shld be changed to are cuz cuts & bruises are plural but its very strong overall & remains so frm beginning to end. Great job

  • 17 years ago

    by Sarahh

    Wow this was just so good, it is so sad i hope your ok!! keep strong.
    havnt talked to you in a while, keep it up
    defiently 5/5