This was so good. I loved it.

This one is rare but i know this kind of setting do exist in the reality.. i feel pity for those people who keeps on battling with such life, and this poem awakes my deep sadness and the thought that i'm still lucky to have what i have right now. nice smooth poem... an interesting piece, sad but very inspirational. just keep it up!!

Aww, that got me teary. I really hope you didn't have to go through that. It's deep emotions are deeper then it shows from this poem, very very touching. It's most horrible when you don't have your home support. And that kind of moments really exist shows more how cruel world has become.
Very touching poem! Flawless.
5/5 Deserves more!

Amazing. This has to be my fave from the poems I read by you. The heartbreaking story you told, truly made me feel for the young girl. I loved the imagery of the streets and the raw emotion was amazing.

"The general public stare straight at me as they pass,
Judging me, from my greasy hair and rags for clothes.
Yet I find I don't really care, not at all,
They can do what they like, they'll just never know."

^amazing

*5/5*