Final goodbye

by Broken Angel   Oct 14, 2007


I thought you'd help me..
I guess i was wrong
I trusted you, you know that
But now my trust is gone

I don't know what to do
I only have one choice
I'm done with my life
Ima leave without making a noise

Everyone's been pushing me
And finally i fell hard
I wont get back up again
My heart is now forever scarred

I thought you were my friend
Guess that was a lie
Now I'm sitting here
In my room and cry

I love you so much
You helped through a lot
But what happened?
Was that all you've got

But I'm just gonna go
Take away my life
This is my final goodbye
And one final cut with my knife

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  • 15 years ago

    by HisBlueEyedAngel

    That is sooo sad...I like how it is written. I am sooo sorry.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nicole

    I really liked your flow and the way engulged me into your peom. it totally can be related to by anyone.. you have an amazing connection with your readers and thats hard to achieve good job! 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by La Muse Angelique

    You should check your poem again there are some little misspellings, it just reads more cleaner.
    The ending is very sad but quite beautiful.
    Good flow, I enjoyed reading this :)

    4/5

    Thanks for commenting and voting on my work, I really appreciate it. :)

    xo angelique