You should check your poem again there are some little misspellings, it just reads more cleaner.
The ending is very sad but quite beautiful.
Good flow, I enjoyed reading this :)

4/5

Thanks for commenting and voting on my work, I really appreciate it. :)

xo angelique

I really liked your flow and the way engulged me into your peom. it totally can be related to by anyone.. you have an amazing connection with your readers and thats hard to achieve good job! 5/5

That is sooo sad...I like how it is written. I am sooo sorry.