Hey i liked ur poem, it's a great way 2 look at life in general i think... u did a great job....
n i really agree with what u said... cool
the words are very simple yet with strong meanings :D

Hay i like ur style of the way u ryme keep it up

Hey i thnk your a great poet, i like your poem its gud & am that guy who like poems which rhyme. I see nothing wrong with your poem. keep it up!

I love it for having writers block that was great very strong ending while still keeping the reader interested throughout great job.

PrinceCharming,

Hey this was a very good poem but the best way to get over writers block i think is not to just throw words together that rhyme and all that but to use your life experiences and write with them and write what you are feeling if your sad write why if your mad write why just write on everything but the best thing that worked with me was write how i was feeling and my life experiences but you did a very good job and you need to keep up the good work and the more you write the less you will have of a writers block and the better you will get just remember 2 things practice makes perfect and set your goals low and you will suceed

Hey thanks 4 da comment on mine poem, I thought the poem was good man, I wana read the rest ov ur poems but my college computer wont let me :( but if dis is anyting ta go by they must b really good, 5/5 il try read ya other poems too

I can't change anything, everything is alright as it seems in my minds eye. I like your poem its such so sweet, with some rhymin schemes. keep up da gud work!! 5/6

:) I like it. 5/5