Moving On

by Allison   Oct 14, 2007


I'm lying on the floor
With my arms open wide
I'm crying from my heart
Pushing the emotions from inside

My love, my passion, is gone
Though I see his face everyday
My heart is slowly shrinking
As I move on my way

*I wrote this about a guy I really like, who doesn't show the same feeling for me. It tells how I liked him, he left, and now I'm slowly moving on. *sighs*

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  • 17 years ago

    by Sweet lig

    Wow i admired u! thats great u have moving on w/sighhmm.. just cheer up... great piece 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Good!

    This one is short but it conveyed enough message on readers eye, The lines were emotional and have full of thoughts. Nicely done!

    Keep it up!

  • 17 years ago

    by Gem

    It may be short but it says all you need to say and it came from the heart.
    What more does a poem need.
    Stay strong m'dear
    5/5
    *Gem*

  • 17 years ago

    by chiildhoodMEMOiiRS x

    Herrow.

    Love this poem,
    You’re very gifted
    =]

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    Kim Ke, _______<&*]]

  • 17 years ago

    by ECILA ice

    A simple poem but sincerely and written directly from your heart, it brought a smile on my face. nice work. bu t i guess you can add a little more on it to make it more alluring to some readers like (ooppsss. don't get me wrong it was nice) just keep it up!!

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