A simple poem but sincerely and written directly from your heart, it brought a smile on my face. nice work. bu t i guess you can add a little more on it to make it more alluring to some readers like (ooppsss. don't get me wrong it was nice) just keep it up!!

Herrow.

Love this poem,
You’re very gifted
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Kim Ke, _______<&*]]

It may be short but it says all you need to say and it came from the heart.
What more does a poem need.
Stay strong m'dear
5/5
*Gem*

Good!

This one is short but it conveyed enough message on readers eye, The lines were emotional and have full of thoughts. Nicely done!

Keep it up!

Wow i admired u! thats great u have moving on w/sighhmm.. just cheer up... great piece 5/5