Wow this is amazing and I understand just how u feel I love the flow and ur choice of words great work 5/5

Excellent!

The enjoyment of reading for this one is too much, I like the wordings and rhyming as well. haha, honestly I suck with rhymings so Im jealous on you haha,

This one, all of the poems i read on youm this one i think is the very best! so Great piece!

Keep on writing!
Your words are powerful!