Its all ur falt

by theUSEDheart   Oct 14, 2007


The knife in my hand
you on the phone
i made the choice
and did not hear your voice

your the reason i did it
but i wont admit it

you did not try and stop me
but now you wish you did
after hearing the news
i was pregnant with your kid

a muffled cry
a silent scream
and all a dial tone
what did it mean

i lost my life
all for you
but who knew

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  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    Wow r u pregnant?

  • 17 years ago

    by Of Sweet Insanity

    Holy crap this was shocking. You have a lot of poems about being with child. Tell me you're not???? Please God please tell me you're not! ANd beautiful poem. A step up above the rest! lol 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by chiildhoodMEMOiiRS x

    Herrow.

    Love this poem,
    You’re very gifted
    =]

    ___________________
    Kim Ke, _______<&*]]

  • 17 years ago

    by Cassidy

    Very good,
    the last stanza is a bit short

    "i lost my life
    all for you
    but who knew"

    i lost my life ,
    all for you.
    but no one really knew.

    adding one or 2 Syllable's
    creates a big deference between great poems
    and decent poems.

    keep up the writing (:
    much love

    -cass

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