Falls Awake

by Elizabeth   Oct 15, 2007


She walks
she walks so far away
too far away to touch, to see, to hear
to even ponder.

She's lost
she's lost in a game
a game of sin, and fun, and fear
its a maze.

She searches
she searchers for the exit
the exit to denial, lust, and loathing
but she doesnt want that.

So she walks
she walks around in circles
and she ponders, listens, and thinks
there is nothing to be concieved.

She's stuck
she's stuck in this maze
right where she awates her future, death, and reality
until she falls awake.

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  • 17 years ago

    by Prophecies In Kodak

    Hm, I like the end of this. Very much so.
    Falls awake just had a ring to it. You had a good visual image for this and overall a pretty good vocabulary. I enjoyed it.

    isaac x