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by Elizabeth Oct 15, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / grieving, loss
She walks she walks so far away too far away to touch, to see, to hear to even ponder. She's lost she's lost in a game a game of sin, and fun, and fear its a maze. She searches she searchers for the exit the exit to denial, lust, and loathing but she doesnt want that. So she walks she walks around in circles and she ponders, listens, and thinks there is nothing to be concieved. She's stuck she's stuck in this maze right where she awates her future, death, and reality until she falls awake.
by Prophecies In Kodak
Hm, I like the end of this. Very much so. Falls awake just had a ring to it. You had a good visual image for this and overall a pretty good vocabulary. I enjoyed it. isaac x