Herrow.

Love this poem,
You’re very gifted
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I hate to be the guy who points out mistakes but just trying to help, haha. First word you got a typo. Good work. :) ~Zach

This poem is very different to the style im use to reading.. but i enjoyed it very much. the flow was very good... although there is one mis spelling. jus fux that and it will b good

This was a really good poem - the form was beautiful and so simple. there happens to be a typo in the 1st line, which i would fix, but other than that i think its perfect.

Very good, I thought it was simple and sweet. Although a saw a mistake.

'Nobosy like you'

Ii shoud that should be 'nobody'. But anyway, good job.

Nice, and short and sweet....makes it a memorable way of sharing an all too common emotion....and an uncommon bond... 5/5