Without You

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Oct 15, 2007


When we don't talk
I feel empty
And when we do
My day brightens up
I miss you so much
I don't know how to be without you
I think of you
And I hope you think of me
It's the best thing
In my empty life
I hope that I too
Brighten up your day
Without you I couldn't live

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  • 17 years ago

    by The Pessimistic Peabody

    You certainly have a way with words and with short pieces too. You effectively expressed the emotions in a small package and I enjoyed it to the fullest. flow was dead on 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Fsams

    "I don't know how to be without you" and "Without you I couldn't live" lines are not ok dear. try revising it and dnt say couldnt live, say cant or cannot live. Overall 4/5

    Tc
    Fsams

  • 17 years ago

    by HUGIYDAWY

    Aww this one is also sweet its so cute i love it... reminds me of my bf

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