Comments : My story/1996

  • 17 years ago

    by Bhavin

    I hate this thing wat happened to u... mind has gone numb... i salute ur braveheartedness. i wont vote for this poem bcoz it ll only mean a mockery to ur life. nothin much to say, just an advice GET WELL SOON. MAY GOD BLESS U!

  • 17 years ago

    by Becca

    Wow. I just really don't know how to say how I feel right now. My heart hurts for you. I couldn't stop reading. I'm so sorry, I have faith that you'll get through this though. Wow. Keep your head up.

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    It is surely very hard to express all this...
    I could feel your emotions while I was reading this piece, and I am deeply touched. You wrote great and honest poem, I hope that it helped you to get over some parts of your awful experiences.

  • 17 years ago

    by Lost in Life

    Very strong i voted 5/5 but not because this poem is good but because your willing to talk about this and let it out cause just like you say your here for us we are here for you to

    hasnt happened to me but did to a friend so i cant say i know how you feel but this poem seriously helped me

  • 17 years ago

    by Jackie

    I am so sorry for your pain and torment, I hope things will out eventually.

  • 16 years ago

    by Lizaveta

    Omg.. i truly don't know what to say... i feel so sorry for you... i know that anyone feeling sorry or symphathetic wouldn't help you overcome and forget all this, i just hope you will.
    I don't want to write anything about rhythm or things like that because there is so much more then this in this poem.
    last stanza shows that you are strong:

    "i WILL recover from all of his tricks
    and help others who have been there before "

    yes u WILL!

  • 16 years ago

    by Jenni

    I am really sorry for what happened to you, and your poem truly shows the raw emotions of what happened. I am in shock from this poem, and basically at a loss for words.

    5/5