YAY WHOOO HOOOOO YOURE BACK!!! LOL..awww its so nice to see a new poem!...ok ok eeeermm...here's my verdict!:umm i liked it! it was sad and it made it seem like a very hopeful storry..second part was REALLY sad..i only gave u a 4...((very sorry)) AT LEAST I DIDNT GIVE U A 2!!!!! HAHAHAHA...its ok its ok lol..i ALWAYS appreciate ur honesty..sumtimes i dont want to be honest cuz i dont want to make the other person feel bad...but anyways..yeah i loved the poem tho...it does raise my eyebrow tho! (hmmm lol)