Tis a very good acrostic babe, better than mine, lol, love the story line, i give it a 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!

Usually people use acrostic as an excuse for a sorry poem but this is very good. it was still a great write, like you didn't even try to make the letters that way. 5/5

Wow, this was utterly amazing. The way this was written, the words and form and such, reminded me so much of one of my friends. It just sounded like her, the way she writes. And I'm a huge fan of her, which means I'm a huge fan of this.

Seriously amazing. :]