The flow in this one was a bit off One helpful tip, oyu wanted tips right? Anyway, try to make your poems flow a little more and try using ryme. Some poeple dont but rhyme makes it easier to read somehow.
Anyway, your poems are really good! Keep up the good work!

Its a new exciting things, I assume you mean "thing" and not things, other than that I thought you did a nice job, a little more bulk toit and it could be a song in my head. Good work.

I enjoy reading this poem just the way it is
I LIKE THE MESSAGE IN IT YOU ARE A AMAZING WRITER YOU ALWAYS

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I keep hitting the tab button sorry
anyway you always surppise me
i think i got your writting style down and then another kind comes up thats good
that says you can write anything 5/5
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