Borderline, Me

by Rachel   Oct 15, 2007


She's cried a thousand deaths
Left not a drop in the ducts
Where do you go when you're in a crossroad?
An inward war of life
Struggling to breath, trying to die
Death seems like a dream
And seeing it seems so much more
It's another door to another place
Can she escape the world into a better one?

The world is caving down on her
With no one to help
Not a soul to release her from pain
These lies they tell her have no depth
You don't love her

Use her abuse her
Leave her
Use her abuse her leave her
That's all she needs and all you give.

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  • 17 years ago

    by CY GINDLE

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  • 17 years ago

    by Catastrophic Beauty

    Great poem. Wonderfully written and very unique. It really gets the reader thinking which is very good.
    You have the potential of being a great writer. Good Job. 4/5

    Take Care!

    -Shannon <3

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Very uniquely written! Like it

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