Very uniquely written! Like it

Great poem. Wonderfully written and very unique. It really gets the reader thinking which is very good.
You have the potential of being a great writer. Good Job. 4/5

Take Care!

-Shannon <3

YOU just keep writting just like you're doing
your poems are excellent. read some of
koriey poems put in 8:11 thats my fav poem of hers all her stuff I THINK U WILL LIKE ITS DARK like yours if you can't
get that poem by search go under my page under fav authors where by the way you will also be cy