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  • 17 years ago

    by Elapsed

    Unfortunately I can totally relate to this piece.
    Lost who i used to be...
    I lie to save myself from hurt,
    Why do i do this every day?!

    The bruises are there,
    The scars are too,
    The worst is on the inside,

    These two verses reached out to me. Although a very sad poem it was very nicely done. The structure and flow of this poem was great. Please keep them coming.. 5/5 for me :)

  • 17 years ago

    by xxSuicidalxx

    Wow! Great poem! I can so relate. Very descriptive and well written!