Hoooow can this not have comments!! lol
I normally find acrostics quite hard to read cos the flow is normally stilted but this one is fab! lol
And the titles attracted me right away =)
Well done
5.5
*Gem*

Another very good poem, i love acrostics and you did wonderfully with this one alex, i love the flow and your choice in wording was perfect, another 5/5 from me!!! keep them coming!!!

Very well written. i like the emotional level. its woven into every word. 5/5

Amazing. I Think You have an AMAZING talent.

Thx 4 commenting my poems

X333 Nia

I don't understand one thing- you described the girl's hair as "strawberry blond", how does that color look like? I would say "strawberry red" because that somehow makes more sense to me but maybe I just misunderstood your description.

All in all, I truly enjoyed in this piece. I like the imagery that you created, it is very vivid and I could clearly imagine every line as the poem unfolded, you did really great job with descriptions from the beginning to the end. Also, whole poem holds very captivating atmosphere which is memorable. I think that you did good job with rhymes, too because the flow of the whole piece is natural and really nice.

Overall, fantastic poem, 5/5 from me.

This is fantastic.
Growing up they teach us that an acrostic in supposed to be used for simple descriptions.
Like Haze for example.
Hard to see
Annoying
Z...
Error

And that has corrupted my attempts at it.
But this, it is fantastically beautiful.
It's a vivid description and it makes me want to attempt to break the barrier my simple education has placed on me.

Thank you.