Written very nicely, I will comment on all your new ones.

This is a very good poem alex, i love how it portrays like a fairy-tale, and the flow is absolutely flawless, not sure but i think here may be a typo in line 23, i give this a perfect 5/5!!!

This poem is very nice and i like it the way youve picked it up from a disney film i lurrrff disney keep it up XD

This poem is very nice and i like it the way youve picked it up from a disney film i lurrrff disney keep it up XD

Hey,
an beautiful poem, just like in the fairy tale,
the poem flows nicely and I enjoyed reading it. uhm I don't know anything else to say...except for nice work! 5/5
kisses Stephanie

Really liked this poem. Flow and rhymes great as usual. 5/5

Perfect example of how looks truly don't mean a thing, they have absolutely nothing to do with what is going to make you happy. a very excellent heart felt poem, truly unique - great job as always 5/5 GG23

Amazing poems. Loved it!!! Must be 5/5!!! You inspired me to write new ones!

Wow, i got goosbumps reading this one. VERY well written. the emotional level was almost over whelming. But it was great. if i could ide give you a 10/5

Unlike most poems, I didn't get the sense of getting deeper and deeper within this poem.
Although beautifully conveyed it didn't have that sense. (I hope you understand what I'm talking about)

All up until that last line, it was a fantastic one, and shows that beauty is obviously in the eye of the beholder.
Great work.

Wow ii love this poem! && ii love the movie! make a poem about the little mermaid ariel please =)