by Gem Oct 15, 2007
category :
Love, romance /
lost love
In the darkened room she clutches her bear |
WOAh! ii LÓVE this man! ii can totally relate! yuh said everything ii needed to & done! Most of us gurls just cry & cry & feel sorry for our selves. . . & yuh sucked it up & omg just soo amazing! lol |
OMG GEM I'M SO SORRRRRYYY I WAS TRYING TO GIVE YOU A 5/5 AND I ACCIDENTLY GAVE YOU A 2/5!!!! I'm really sorry if it brought down the vote too far.... Eeks I LOVED this poem though. I totally am in LOVE with it. It's going on my favorites, FOR SURE. Its s powerful, strong. Brave. Cute ending. Loved the flow and the vocab. Arg it was amazing! (I get a trophy for world's longest comment!) |
by MEMI
Aww that is cute |
by Dark Secrets
I like this poem... we girls should all be doing this... nice ending lol |
REALLY cool poem, I laughed out loud as i read the end bit. Every girl has done this at one point in their lives and it makes you feel invinsible great feeling lol. The flow was bloody exellent and i really loved the idea of the happiness and 'just deserts' as it were. Really good poem going in my favs :D xxx alex xxx |