Love is

by Jessicca Wiemken   Oct 15, 2007


Love is like a baby rose...
it starts out small...
and grows in to something beautiful...

Love is like a rollercoaster...
you go up slowly...
and down really fast...
so ya it has its ups and downs...
but look out for the loops...
cause your going all the way around...
and straight down...
and now its all over for me and you...

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  • 16 years ago

    by pLeASeTakEMyHeArT

    Want to see more detail, but it has emotion and it good, just added more feelings into it. Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by LovingANDwaiting

    Use more emotion next time... but it was good

  • 17 years ago

    by yvondapoetic1

    It was short but i understood wat u meant kinda left out a lil more detailsz dat culd have happened nxt tyme use more wordsz nd try 2 put more emition in it

  • 17 years ago

    by Tim Mauntler

    Short and there wasn't enough to show what's really going on here... but it still shows emotion ad it does put love in plenty of metaphores
    keep writing

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