This is an AWESOME poem... 10/10 best ive ever read

Its so cutee and pretty and happy.
i love it!

and the rhyming didn't take away from what you wanted to say too!

it has such bedtime story / music lyric potential :P

That is beautiful. I hope it becomes famous and that people recite it to their children before bed evey night :)

Omg! i Love this poem sooooo much! The words just go and everything! Wow! Amazing! Keepit up! Cya

This is going on my favorite poems list this is aswome perfect stuff almost had me crying in a good way 6/5

Wow. you are an amazing poet. this surely is better than the fairytales i've read. it's so lovely. 55

Very touching

Wow... This is one of the best poems I have ever read. Maybe the best - seriously... I love everything in it. The rhyming, choice of words... The words you've chosen to create this piece is like magic... it really amazes me.

The opening stanza was superb... I was really 'hook' in the poem.

And the ending was perfect...

Gem, please write more! I look forward to reading more from you :)

You deserve a 5/5

I have to be honest I couldn't help but laugh as I read this. The poem it's self is great, but it's just not my taste, pretty much the TOTAL oposite. But you have great tallent=]

Wow ...
this is beautiful
so full of happiness

well done x x

This is honestly amazing like wow. undescribable. its beautiful.

I like it its very out there and makes me smile always a good sign

Wow! what a beauty,it takes you to another world.

Man i really love how you write poetry and i really hope i can become someone like you...

i have a slight depression and no one knows.. i cant tell them. but poetry is my second life now and to think about it i dont really know how it creeped upon me...

but i would really love to be your frend and get good writting tips from you... i am new on the sight and i want to meet new ppl also.

hey when you get this i would like to ask you a question.. nothing personal.. but yeah..

hey i think you should like write a book on poetry or something cause your really that good.. = )

PERFECT!!!! I rly rly enjoyed reading this poem it's great in all ways... i like the idea the style and the flow of the poems keep it up!!!!!!! =D

Very sweet poem. Lovely ending. I actually enjoyed reading it. I do not write much sweet poetry. I did write one a while back, Through a Child's Eye. Check it out if you like.

Wonderful i love it its so koo and amazen how beauiful poem so sweet

I love this poem...Its sweet...=)

I don't know where i should start with this poem i love it for many reasons, one because i love to eat and it involves candy and that its so cute but the mean is so strong i love this poem if i got a dollar for every time i read this poem ill be swimming in dimonds thats how much i love this poem
xoxo

I love this poem. It like something a little girl would imagine. Awesome job.
-vino