That is so cute, i wash i could find a world like that!! very well written. 5/5

This has to be the best poem i have ever read!!!!!!! you are amazing!!!!

Thankyou so much i have now got something to read to my niece when she gets scared at night that was gourgus

I like ur poem is so magical
well have a great day

It is great.

Wow! it made me kind of drift away for a second there!!! its awesome!
taegan - emily xx

Wow Wonderful poem. It is so sweet.......

I will give it 20/5

This is good 5/5 could u read mine and comment plz

Wow..that was just..so beautiful. Reading it made me feel like a little kid again. Maybe if I remember it, one day I'll tell this poem to my children :]

Woah, this poem is amazing :)
Love it

No comment.... but..
AWESOME!!!

I enjoyed it, but did not understand, this was my comedy, very "up beat"...very not me, which does not mean much, lol, ive never had this kind of dreamland, it seems sometimes i've been even too scared to go off into any sort of dream, mine are very grim, but on the other hand there is this jealousy...a nice picture you have painted, butterflies and pixie dust...it reminds me a lot of my five year old sisters room and reality at the moment

It does bring back memories of childhood as somebody mentioned. It flows very nicely and is nice to read.

Amazing work
i love this poem
it makes me think of when i was little
great job keep writing

This poem is so cute,
i wish i could write like this.
keep up the good work..
xoxo andrea danielle.

Wow. this is amazing. your ability to paint this serene,beautiful picture in my mind while still rhyming is insane. i loved reading this, it was like a little mental escape.
5/5. great job.

It was simply amazing

A i love it..keep it up...

This is rly good

That is an absolutely magical piece, i myself luv to read abotu fantasy and the magic that surrounds us all, your words are so soft you can see the gentle thought put into this wonderful piece. xox sam