by Perfection
Cool style and a cool poem... you are very creative... |
by Gasttlee
This was definitely flawless, but ouch! A lot of powerful and angry feelings here, but it carefully done and well placed! 5/5 |
by Cindy
Bryan |
by Kaila
I loved it! I can easily relate to this poem, because I'm going through something similar myself. I thought your poems detail was good and I loved the style nice work. |
by Sweet lig
Oh,, what a poem.... i think i have to congratulate u coz honestly u really impressed me and i think not even me also some readers out there! u have a great talent to show so, just keep on writing wish u all the best coz u always done a very great job.. 5/5 |
by Corruption
Great poem |
Great job..for one form poetry is sooo hard so i give you props for that..but the flow was great and so was the emotion you put into it. It was definitely felt. Keep up the great work. |
by Marc Ortiz
Wow Bryan you're really gifted in writing Sonnets. I really love reading your sonnets. I hope to read more beautiful poems from you. |
Excellent write, with such restrictions. I loved the way you wrote this. Your choice of words was good. I really liked the way it flowed, that is hard to do sometimes in formed poetry. Great Job!!! |
by darah
I just loved this! |
by Ingrid
This is a fine piece of poetry! I really loved reading every line. I will definately read more of your poems in the future. |