"With eyes warm as love" this is an excellent metaphorical expression and the analogy has a perfect positive impression on readers. The whole poem is well written :)

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Fsams

The rhymes are simple but, it works well for this piece. The poem is seemingly very heartfelt and sweet. Nice read.

marcella

Aww.. i really like the metaphores in this one and it is FULL of emotion. truly written from the heart. i love it!!!! keep up the great work! :o]

Wow this poem really touched me.

5/5

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Now this one I loved! The imagery you created with your words was just flawless and amazing. Well done *5/5*

I like the rhyming in this poem, it adds a lot effect to the rhythm of this piece. I would suggest you to make some repetition in this poem, that would create even stronger and more powerful atmosphere.
You have one mistake:
- I don't see any rhyming in second stanza.
I don't like last stanza, I think that you could make more powerful ending.
I love the way you expressed feelings, and whole poem has very vivid picture.

Aww..this is so sweet and well written...I love it1 amzing job on this piece! Filled with emotion...and good imagery! Keep writing! 5/5

Well written, Words it seems straight from the heart. Good use of metaphors.Simple, yet effective rymthes..

What can I say, its a good write, and an excellent read.

Keep it up,
--Elly.

Awww this poem was soo beautiful!! i love how you described your love, and how you could sit by her for hours. beautiful magical poem! great job! 5/5

I liked this poem, it was simple and sweet which portrayed such loving emotions over the atmosphere while reading it. A heartfelt poem which expressed your emotions nicely and captured the reader. Overall an enjoyable read none the less. Well done. ~Mel

The emothion in this poem is very strong you have also created some very beautiful imagery very well written 5/5

This poem is so sweet :) i really loved how you described your love for her. she's lucky to have you. The only compliant I have:

So that together we will be never bored

bored isn't a strong word maybe you can change it?

I absolutely loved this:

With eyes warm as love
I listen to a song she made
I can sit by her for hours
Listening to her sweat serenade

excellent

5/5