I finally see that someone is aware of the pros and cons of this country... it's about time and WOW!! this is really powerful... you truly are a writer and an amazing one at that

Very very nice. You made great true points that I agree with. American is a lot more effed up than a lot of people think it is. Great job expressing your point of view.

Some very strong opinions. I reckon this could be made into a beautiful poem. I'd sit down with it, and gradually work it into a form, it doesn't need to rhyme.

Good work, feelings are key to good poems :D

Keep writing,
Emily :)