One Wish

by PygmyPuff   Oct 15, 2007


If I had one wish,
it would be to be with you.
All the times that we spend
together just aren't long enough.

If I had one wish,
it would be to lay with you.
The warm summer beach,
or cold winter-y snow,
never felt so right.

If I had one wish,
it would be to stay with you.
The pain would sink inside of me,
but never touch your skin.

If I had one wish,
it would be to kidnap you.
Immaturity isn't the cause.
I want to save you from your life,
and make it part of mine.

If I had one wish,
it would be to be with you.
I need to know that you're alright,
and that's the only way I know how.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Natalie84

    I want to save you from your life,
    and make it part of mine.

    GO HEAD GIRL!!! These lines stole the poem!!!! Wow...I'm feeling those lines a little TOO MUCH!! !HHAHAHAHA NICE!

    I like this because it's innocent but serious. Your repition was on point...some times people like to repeat too much...

    "The pain would sink inside of me,
    but never touch your skin"
    These lines also stuck out...beautiful way of putting it...simply powerful...

    Nice write my friend!!!!!!

  • 17 years ago

    by JustKristina

    Oh!! i'm so glad i picked this one, it about made me cry. my friend had to move away and we talked about kidnapping her. and this is like exactally what i want to say to her!!! i love it!!!

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