Oh!! i'm so glad i picked this one, it about made me cry. my friend had to move away and we talked about kidnapping her. and this is like exactally what i want to say to her!!! i love it!!!

I want to save you from your life,
and make it part of mine.

GO HEAD GIRL!!! These lines stole the poem!!!! Wow...I'm feeling those lines a little TOO MUCH!! !HHAHAHAHA NICE!

I like this because it's innocent but serious. Your repition was on point...some times people like to repeat too much...

"The pain would sink inside of me,
but never touch your skin"
These lines also stuck out...beautiful way of putting it...simply powerful...

Nice write my friend!!!!!!