The Accident
by Draven Oct 15, 2007
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"I am alone cold, and wet. I just wished the accident killed me instead of you, all I had to do was switch seats with you and then it would have been me. Why did it have to take you? You had so much to live for and I had nothing but you! And now your gone and all that is left are I and what used to be your stuff. I loved you and I knew that you knew it, though I never said it you could always see it in my eyes. Why did you have to leave me like this? I need you now and I will always will need you. Please come back to me I know that you are in there somewhere in there. I need you so much right now! Please please please come back..." |
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16 years ago
Awww.. your emotion are al over this. mostly sadness and wanting. made me sad =( sad piece you have writen here. it felt like i was saying them to someone that i love. wow! Keep up the amazin job.
TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy -
16 years ago
by ASHLEY BROOM
This was good so much emotion was put into it keep it up
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16 years ago
You put so much emotion in this, I wouldn't be surprised if writing it took a lot out of you. I can sympathize with the loss you explain here. Very nice. 5/5
~Forever Broken~ -
16 years ago
You put sadness emotion in this wished it was you and still can't believe and you wrote it pretty good to expressed your feelings.
