You put sadness emotion in this wished it was you and still can't believe and you wrote it pretty good to expressed your feelings.

You put so much emotion in this, I wouldn't be surprised if writing it took a lot out of you. I can sympathize with the loss you explain here. Very nice. 5/5
~Forever Broken~

This was good so much emotion was put into it keep it up

Awww.. your emotion are al over this. mostly sadness and wanting. made me sad =( sad piece you have writen here. it felt like i was saying them to someone that i love. wow! Keep up the amazin job.

TaKe CaRe,
Frenchy