Behind these walls

by xxSuicidalxx   Oct 15, 2007


Walls around me
no doors for escape
only a mirror
in the corner
so i can see
my haunted face

Black walls
with blood streaks
don't know where the blood came
from
I guess its me

trapped and helpless
lost and dead
no hope for escaping
I'll be here till death

I cry for rescue
But no one comes
no one hears
so i drown
in these tears

Behind these walls
That exist in my head
I take this gun
and shoot myslef
in the head
till i fall to the ground
DEAD
goodbye...world...

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  • 17 years ago

    by Stephanie

    O_o.
    This was a very darkish, morbid piece of poetry and I think that you did a fantastic job on it. The emotions were strong, the flow was great, & the word usage was good too. Overall: 5.5 Lovely job. :)

    -- Stephanie Lynn .+.