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by xxSuicidalxx Oct 15, 2007 category : Sadness, depression / about death
Walls around me no doors for escape only a mirror in the corner so i can see my haunted face Black walls with blood streaks don't know where the blood came from I guess its me trapped and helpless lost and dead no hope for escaping I'll be here till death I cry for rescue But no one comes no one hears so i drown in these tears Behind these walls That exist in my head I take this gun and shoot myslef in the head till i fall to the ground DEAD goodbye...world...
by Stephanie
O_o. This was a very darkish, morbid piece of poetry and I think that you did a fantastic job on it. The emotions were strong, the flow was great, & the word usage was good too. Overall: 5.5 Lovely job. :) -- Stephanie Lynn .+.