Wow.....this is an amazing poem...it causes me to feel the deep pain that is being showed in this poem.....great work

Wow that was kind of scary but very good and well written, i commend your style and unique thoughts. great job, i loved it

Such a sad story being portrayed here; very moving.
It's a given now that your imagery is second to none, you display your imagination so vividly again in this piece.

The title really jumps out at you here, wonderfuly title. I'm very surprised this hasn't been read more.

A poem more suited to my palate this one, flows really well throughout. I think the 3rd stanza is a really good way to end this.

"And, tears fall like they've never fallen before.
Silent cries of the purest heart on the other side of the door"
Wonderful lines.

This is my favourite that I've read of your work. I will definitely be adding this poem to my favourites.

Very nice work on this one!
[5/5]
~Pete.

Goregous. The descriptions, flow, the story that I got from this piece. It struck me as sad, and painful but also there were notes of happiness to it. Some of it was just the happiness would have been there, but is now lost and other is fresh still right there beneath the pain. Overall, goregous. I loved it, 5/5.